I Became a Villainess - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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"her soul has been considerably damaged by the loops up till now"

geez that sucks. I can only assume the heroine knows about the loops just as much and knowingly sends the villainess off to her death, too.
 
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There was no point at all for the author to include the point that she was overweight with acne if it was only gonna take her two pages to miraculously overcome it....
 
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Damn just how much did her parents stuff her to get so chubby at 10?
Do they not know to cut back or this is the era when people think fat is more attractive?
Dang, her past life self looked better than her current self.
Kinda seem like a vibe for her to eventually defeat the original heroine who somehow obtained the power to rival god from all the looped happy endings.
Wait.. the villainess intro was looking good but what happened to have the FL reborn into that state?
Isn't the biggest flag avoidance to just stay fat..? I mean, she'll gain no attractions from the dangerous MLs for sure if she did but the role of villainess is needed.. 😂
That 2 weeks training effect.. her metabolism must be very great or the cheats kick in..
The doppelslime's tail made it look more like a soul/spirit..
 
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Yes, it's a manga, yes it's fictif, and yes it's a isekai with cheat so I shouldn't be irritated by that. But I can't help it, in 2 weeks she is already really slimer and even lose her acnee (I though it was freckles but that would be impossible). And after 2 month she only lose 6kg (which she seemed to have lost after 2 week), however how can 6 mere kg seem as at least 15 kg?
Yes, yes and yes I should'nt take it seriously but really it annoyed because it's not logical. (Same with how careless she is be her dead, doesn't she have friends or family? Being an otaku doesn't mean having no life, I mean she isn't a hikikomori).

Oh, I am not giving up the story, it may be interesting and 1 chapter isn't enough to decided, but allow me to complain ;)
 
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Author: Draws ordinary sports wear
Author: Wait. That doesn't make sense.
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But but, she herself admitted that without Erika, the protagonist would just look like a girl flirting with multiple boys which isn't a good image for a heroine so why did she decide to not act like a villainess?
 
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"made it loop"

I wonder if the original Erica realized the loops, depressed for having to suffer unlimited times, then suicide.
 
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Losing as much weight as is shown in two weeks without surgery would be... maybe not just unhealthy; possibly deadly...?

Chalk it up to her magical healing powers, I guess ~w~

The text says it's supposed to ultimately be 6 kilos over two months, to be fair, which is much more reasonable. Essentially, it's not the author but the artist that I'm snarking at. oxo
 
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Uh, isn’t it kind of dark that the original Erika chose to end her fate by committing suicide after dying multiple times in the story loop?
 
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Uh, isn’t it kind of dark that the original Erika chose to end her fate by committing suicide after dying multiple times in the story loop?
I'm late to the party, but yep, that stopped me from reading as soon as I reached that.

"Lol, I'm a god that created a world that loops again and again where a girl I created specificaly to get killed everytime commited suicide to escape this fate! Wanna be the replacement for that girl?"

F. off, p.o.s. "god". If your "creation" is reliant on the endless suffering of someone, you don't deserve respect.

"But she was a villainess"

Yeah, because YOU made her a villainess.

So, in short, I'm not even going to bother reading this.
 

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