I Don't Want to Work! - Ch. 5

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Why do they have to do the "Huh? i notice something sussy. But im probably wrong." bs? these kinds of thoughts does not fit competent characteristic. FML had multiple reincarnations and so her experience is impeccable. Her outright denying something that caught her eye is how you kill her competency. Its as simple as just not having that "I must be mistaken" line. She just need to take note of the sus and go on until she needs that sus point for her next act. I dont care much about plot holes but i care about character holes.
 

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