I Fell in Love, so I Tried Livestreaming. - Ch. 86 - The Aftermath of the Festival

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No because a romance story is about the designated couple and their relationship, what triangles and harem does is throw a sense of mystry over who the lead ends up in the end but still it should be established earlier and not thrown in later.

When you throw a random girl halfway win you just make everything before the point she entered the story irrelevant because we arent reading a biography, the story structure is set around a specific frame that is not the character entire life, when people "ah yes, I would read it" are either naive because they wouldnt or even if they did, they would happen to be a tiny minority as well ignoring the author likely doesnt want to make a fictional biography, he wants to write about a specific story that have a beginning and a end.

And the argument writers should write biographies is ignoring its not the same structure as other stories nor is something people want to read because if the argument that halfway the "real" story begin then LotR should had started with Bilbo childhood and continued well after the Elves leave Middle Earth (it kinda does but its just a epilogue) and obviously it doesnt because it wants to be about a specific event and stories follow this structure.

What I do see a lot is contrarians that want to break down the story structure because they want to be contrarians, there is a reason why Seo after trucking Suzuka had written himself into a corner and why he never done it again.
Laughts in Chihiro being a BG filler and winning when she was like the 11nt girl.

Modern harems go for the everyone appears at the same time aproach, which is a god send.
 
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NGL i dont remember anything the blondie have ever done in the series, hopefully am just a forgetful person becasue i dont want the "I appeared first so am the one who win" situation.
That's what I'm saying, it feels like Jimi did way WAY moore than Hakua
 
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I get that writing's tough, and it's hard to appeal to everyone in a scenario like this, but I can't help but feel kinda disappointed that Hakua, the shoo-in, won like that.
 

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