Someone has said it already but 99% of this author works are shitty, navel gazing, overtly and overly melodramatic pieces of repetitive teenage wangst crap.
This would work in a series but not a one shot since we have no emotional connection to these characters and as such have no reason to give a shit. Its not even that much of a tragedy and it doesn't really portray an understanding of why break ups happen either so it becomes worthless.
On the other hand, it could've been interesting if it had the girl be someone who wanted affirmation in a relationship, as seen with how she misses when her gf was weaker and needed her more. That would've made the story have a moral and genuinely be interesting. Unfortunately this story has no purpose because it has no moral or emotional stakes and as such it sucks. Amazing art though I guess.
I normally really like Murasakino's work like If It Rains Next Week or You Are My Angela or even that other oneshot 30 MINUTES. but this one was meh, I suppose it was just a short though so we shouldn't really judge it that much
I love this, idk how to put it in better sentence. Just the emotions the character felt, are the same I feel sometimes in my own relationship. This was a good one (x this is a normal feeling, and I’m glad to find out others think like this as well