I Time-Traveled and Confessed to My Teacher Crush - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

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Welp, compared to previous one I read, teacher is giving away straight out pedophile vibes. YIKES.

Quite a lot fan service too... too much even for my pervert liking. Got to make it moderate, otherwise it's just borderline hentai.

Art is awful, especially when there's perspective on faces. Unrefined nightmare fuel.

Time to dive into dumpster fire to see how low that kind of stories can get.
 
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It's damn good but... How do I say it lacks.. you know seriousness
I mean it's straightforward but still chapters feels lacking of completeness 🤔
 
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Feels... Empty? Characters seem shallow, story feels like it's written by a 9 (or is it 7?) y.o.

I understand wanting to avoid "drama" and just go for romance, but in that case don't write about student-teacher relationships, you can't have both.

There are plenty of examples of good writing on this premise, but having teacher just say "okay" ans start dating a kid 9 years younger than she is feels beyond weird and somewhat disgusting (even for manga).
 
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Feels... Empty? Characters seem shallow, story feels like it's written by a 9 y.o.

I understand wanting to avoid "drama" and just go for romance, but in that case don't write about student-teacher relationships, you can't have both.

There are plenty of examples of good writing on this premise, but having teacher just say "okay" ans start dating a kid 9 years younger than she is feels beyond weird and somewhat disgusting (even for manga).
Yeah, "Gal Cooking" and my favourite "Sensei Can't Teach Me About Love" were so much better.
 
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I was actually reminiscing about "Sensei can't teach me about love" and wanted to read something similar.
It's probably most tame and thought out student+teacher romcom, where they're both thinking rationally, supporting cast is bloody aware of how serious their relationship age gap is, there's some risque moments but fluffy to "digest", teacher parents point of view of their relationship and mc's also.
There's also another relationship in the story where a girl is much younger than her lover, with moral dilemma and reasonable choice.

Actually one of rare stories that I re-read just how good it is. Wish there was more...
 

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