I Want to Make Black-Knight Fall In Love With Me! - Vol. 3 Ch. 17 - Clarice and Frost

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Feel like it have good premier but all the ship not really develop properly. Even the mainship lacking something.
I think the trusting issue could be done differently, like She reveal it to Frost a lot sooner, that alone could also give it some doubt between them if author want to keep some drama
 
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"The End."
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Thanks so much to Oddity for bringing this to us. sometime has managed to develop quite a unique art style and take on various settings. It's a pity that it hasn't quite gelled into a full series since Hero and Former General, but they're still good yarns. And while clearly hurried along this ending was surprisingly satisfying, not as fully fleshed out as might be wished, and not the future arcs that also would have been fun to see, but a good end to the beginning of their future together. Hope sometime is able to keep trying.
 
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glad we got some manner of resolution.

Ideally, Violet would have gotten a proper arc that saw her earning her place of apparent redemption here, and Dahlia's seeming relationship budding with Lyla would have been fleshed out in contrast to what she'd had (or not had, as is the case) with Violet.
And of course many, many more scenes with Clarice slowly cracking open the icy heart of Frost and winning her over. But we got an actual kiss from Frost before the end, and that's always something to celebrate.

But, it was a conclusion, and the ends were tied up, even if done so with such great expediency on the part of the author & artist. Glad we got it for the time we did, even if it should have been for much, much more.

And thank you for the TL work in bringing this to us, as well.
 

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