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I get the feeling that a lot of the characters act on whims without a lot of actual justification. MC's mother obsesses over her son becoming the emperor, even though he's number seven and has no chance. This seems to trigger palace intrigues out of fear that she is planning to have the other heirs killed. But all the brothers loooove each other ! But the half-elf guy is sickly, and so is . . . not supposed to see MC? Or something?
There are a bunch of odd conflicts that get set up for no particular reason, which just evaporate for almost no reason. I've been reading this, thinking may be things will settle into a story, but this is just too much!
There are a bunch of odd conflicts that get set up for no particular reason, which just evaporate for almost no reason. I've been reading this, thinking may be things will settle into a story, but this is just too much!
