I'll Do That Marriage

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The writing is super messy most of the time, the pacing is often all over the place and some scenes are just way too cheesy. But it's still okayish honestly, and quite enjoyable to read nonetheless. Just don't expect super high quality.
 
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The pacing is kinda.. all over the place. I really want to like this one, but I couldn't enjoy how the story flows
 
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Ah I did just see this one up on Tappytoon (link), so that would explain it.
Thank you for working on this until now!
 
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I feel like there’s something wrong and I’m missing something. It also feels a bit rushed, I think they could do better with exposition or something.
 

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