its the law of equivalent exchangeHow can there be an example for good writing (giving the mc a believable and rational motive not to admit the feelings he obviously has) and really bad one (having the previous owner randomly appear at the very moment they happen to talk about her) be so close to each other in the same chapter?
Makes sense. Nothing wrong with that.Him: " So there's somebody has been living in the basement the whole time? "
Her:" Apparently my house has been taken over by a random dude, guess I would live in here from now on then. "
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Let's face it, she's not the only one with issues. The guy's barely an adult (is he even 20?), with anti-social tendency. You're asking for a lot here.Oh yes, the standard drama "I'll be a burden." Get over yourself already. There is a point that she'll accept it regardless of her own feelings, but that's when you start to try to find out about that. But remember that someone with that mentality will also never push her own feelings regardless of what they are, so if there's something there you're still the one who has to move, whether by stating your own feelings or helping her overcome her issues.
Missing elf, probably not dead. Well, she's sure to not show up any time now, especially not immediately now when you said that.
Makes sense. Nothing wrong with that.
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I'm not asking for more than what he should be able to deal with. Or learn how to deal with.Let's face it, she's not the only one with issues. The guy's barely an adult (is he even 20?), with anti-social tendency. You're asking for a lot here.