I'm Quitting the Hero's Party

[OmnipotentCheese]

I feel like the quality of the TL has markedly decreased. Or maybe author had some kind of life crisis. I'm not always following wtf is going on. Feels like translation.
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[OmbreVengeresse]

Its actually a really nice manga, but the gender bender is unnecessary. But I think they just skip things in novel which is i dont read

The gender change is not a problem for the hero in the story, I feel like there are things missing in this webtoon.

 

[Jekyk]

The gender change is not a problem for the hero in the story, I feel like there are things missing in this webtoon.

Is that why is seems off? I dont read any novel so idk, but the story is really rushed in the beginning no?

 

[OmbreVengeresse]

I've seen feedback saying that in the LN the sex change was more impactful.

 

[fukpcness]

It's not gender bender for no reason. The original Korean novel as well as translation on tappytoon and Kindle are a very good read. If I remember correctly Rania is actually Transgender, the first 15 chapters focus on how miserable her life as a man was, and explains the laws of this world.
And most importantly explains how gender bender happened and focuses much more on Rania's feeling to being a woman. And her discovering her womanhood.

I don't recommend reading this manhwa it's very bad in comparison to the source material.

So he was mentally ill since the beginning? Dam that sucks.

 

[chanzy7]

Is that why is seems off? I dont read any novel so idk, but the story is really rushed in the beginning no?

In the novel, I feel like it wasn't rushed at all. We spend quite a few chapters focusing on the events that led up to the him turning into a girl.

Edit Wow the first chapter is a dumpster fire. Literally skipped everything that led up to the TS, and skips ahead.

 

[Jekyk]

In the novel, I feel like it wasn't rushed at all. We spend quite a few chapters focusing on the events that led up to the him turning into a girl.

Edit Wow the first chapter is a dumpster fire. Literally skipped everything that led up to the TS, and skips ahead.

Told u bro, it's really weird

 

[genogar]

Why is there a genderbend aspect to the story? It barely adds anything to the story other than being a cover for his real identity as the OP legendary battle mage, but it didn't need to be a genderbend for that.

It's a weird take on the retired op hero / rebirth / power fantasy tropes but the challenges Raniel faces have nothing to do with his new gender but rather a new identity because no one knows who he is. It's unexplored and lazy, if you change it from genderbend to a vanilla rebirth/isekai then it doesn't change the story at all.

Raniel seems completely asexual as well, may as well be a Goku expy. This is like Ranma 1/2 but the story just avoids mentioning anything about the genderbend or anything remotely lewd, it's extremely jarring. A retired hero power fantasy rebirth genderbend series, but it somehow keeps it extremely classy (other than Raniel having a ridiculously huge chest).

 

[poweron]

This is average, the plot flow is messy but is digestible, the art is okay and action can be better
Tldr: fast food manga

 

[TomBrady]

Why is there a genderbend aspect to the story? It barely adds anything to the story other than being a cover for his real identity as the OP legendary battle mage, but it didn't need to be a genderbend for that.

It's a weird take on the retired op hero / rebirth / power fantasy tropes but the challenges Raniel faces have nothing to do with his new gender but rather a new identity because no one knows who he is. It's unexplored and lazy, if you change it from genderbend to a vanilla rebirth/isekai then it doesn't change the story at all.

Raniel seems completely asexual as well, may as well be a Goku expy. This is like Ranma 1/2 but the story just avoids mentioning anything about the genderbend or anything remotely lewd, it's extremely jarring. A retired hero power fantasy rebirth genderbend series, but it somehow keeps it extremely classy (other than Raniel having a ridiculously huge chest).

Not that ridiculous. There are far larger in brown dust 2. But it's basically cuz there was TS kind of thing at some point for authors and a lot of them wrote a TS where either it's isekai or it's like magic TS but nothing changes.