On the terms of Art, it looks really nice!
Aside from that, I likely would read this even if the art was just a bunch of rough sketches.
My one comment here is "I won't bully her, I'll look like a racist" GIRL, YOU'RE ALREADY LOOKING TO BULLY SOMEONE!
Also "Definitely not her, she looks like the school shooter type" cracked me up, poor Layla, tho after the soccer game she is not beating the allegations.
