Isekai de Ane ni Namae o Ubawaremashita

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I agree! This looks good:

"In a world where her name and memories are stolen by her older sister, a different world doting fantasy opening up for her destiny!"
 
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Someone should remove the villainess tag. It was probably put in just because of the first chapter, but the sister is only jealous and goes "her name's the source of her luck! I'ma steal it in this isekai".
There's no real villainy or bullying. The situation even seems to be resolving entirely in the current chapters, and afterwards I'm guessing it'll be your standard isekaied girls fighting demons.
 
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the art is good but the story is going to be pretty predictable, at the end MC probably going to forgive her sister for stealing her identity, what's killing me is how long must we wait until her sister's ruse is revealed to the public, I'm not a masochist so I'm going to stop reading for a few months until the situation is cleared
 
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We're reaching levels of oblivious pushover so high that they were previously thought impossible outside of a lab environment.
 
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This story is so predictable it feels like the author is being lazy. The characters' personalities are as flat as a sheet of paper.
 
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really cool story but
WHAT IN THE KITCHEN PRINCESS IS THIS
 
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I liked what I read. Yeah, it's silly and generic but not bad, per se. The double switcheroo is fun and engaging imo.
Not everything needs to be a literary masterpiece, anyway.
 
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One of my many "Red Flags" for plot writing is:
  • A female MC who just "goes with the flow," and never attempts to become a driving force for her own destiny
I think this one is going that direction. The double isekai girls where one is "bad" and one is "good" is also a little tired. That they're both sisters from Earth is nice, but I feel like much more could have been done with that. And the name stealing is straight "Idiot Ball" trope, it just doesn't make a lick of sense, regardless of the major plot point it's meant to represent.
 

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