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Rather than getting better the rewrite is getting worse and worse, so many errors that damage the quality of this series...
Cute parts like this get cut short and robbed of their essence: "Please don't be violent in a saintess's room!"
And it doesn't happen once or twice but the chapter is missing coutless little details like this sentences cut short altered or rewritten with errors...
Cute parts like this get cut short and robbed of their essence: "Please don't be violent in a saintess's room!"
And it doesn't happen once or twice but the chapter is missing coutless little details like this sentences cut short altered or rewritten with errors...