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In a terrible attempt to create a cliffhanger, the author just completely ruined the remote feeling of a climax that he had barely managed to create.
@VonCesaw The story is crap. Or rather, I expect it to be crap (it doesn't look like the author is competent enough to develop a cohesive story from what I have read so far. But it is too early to come to a conclusion)
However, you are right about the art. Slipped my mind since I am not enjoying the story thus far, but the artist does seem quite experienced. Actually, that is probably the reason why I decided to give this series a shot. I just really hope that our author quickly gain experience and learn from his mistakes. Please, don't leave us with this kind of endpage again (actually, can we blame the artist for that? how does that work anyways? Who decided that the last page will feature a fully visible lewd loli, and not merely their shadow to add more mystery?)
@VonCesaw The story is crap. Or rather, I expect it to be crap (it doesn't look like the author is competent enough to develop a cohesive story from what I have read so far. But it is too early to come to a conclusion)
However, you are right about the art. Slipped my mind since I am not enjoying the story thus far, but the artist does seem quite experienced. Actually, that is probably the reason why I decided to give this series a shot. I just really hope that our author quickly gain experience and learn from his mistakes. Please, don't leave us with this kind of endpage again (actually, can we blame the artist for that? how does that work anyways? Who decided that the last page will feature a fully visible lewd loli, and not merely their shadow to add more mystery?)