Isekai de Te ni Ireta Seisan Skill wa Saikyou datta You desu ~Souzou & Kiyou no W Chiuto de Musou Suru~

[donoghu]

When reading this, I imagine Yoda saying "Too strong in the plot, that one is. Only worse at this point, it can get."

As an Isekai, this gets a 6/10... maybe 7/10 at moments. As a manga/story, this would get around 3/10 at most.
Visually good and with a good pacing in the panels and details, it's main downfall is how much it hang itself around the plot in a way that can rival the worse Manwha (which are really the worse).

The MC is relatively passive and, sometime, active and curious and yet he ends up at God level without actually putting any effort and then he's humble up to the point of being negative about it. Whenever he needs something, it magically appears within the next moment. This is basically like putting a 5 page development on a story that has 100 pages in its intro and 50 pages in its conclusion. It's something that many Isekai suffers from, but only the worse suffers from it at a point like with this one.

The Author, Toono Konoe, clearly doesn't have what it takes to write a proper story at the moment.

=EDIT=
21 chapters in and I can confirm that this is pretty much a brain-dead Isekai without any innovation nor purpose.
The Golem-pulled Cart/RV is one of the most lazy and badly though thing I have seen about Isekai's transportation. Seriously, the author even FORGOT about his own idea around the Golem because, when fighting the giant ugly tree, he made the MC us some magic instead of just making the Golem use its laser beam which, from what was shown, basically 10x stronger. At that point, the Golem which is pulling the cart is only an after-though used to literally copy-paste the SAME image of the cart multiple times over different background. (It's even worse considering how the golem is making the cart move forward in a standing pose!)

The author often put some kind of "Ho! We're gonna cover that part at a later moment" kind of situation just to, 1-3 pages later, resolve the situation. Like how the MC get a letter for the priest girl he saved telling him "If they ever meet again, she will show her appreciation"... and then they meet basically less than 5 pages later as she was waiting for him outside of town. Why the f*ck did she ever wrote that letter and not just waited for him at the damn INN?

This is getting on par with In Another World with my cellphone in terms of bad story telling and braindless plot devices.

 

[Urdine]

Oof, I could turn my brain off long enough to enjoy this early on but volume 3 was too much to bear. Super convenient plot points are bread and butter of isekai but this one just beats that dead horse like a red headed step child to the point that even I couldnt endure.

In particular the, here is a item even you can't fix it needs a super rare thing! Oh right, the waifu has that....on her...at that very moment.....just carries it around with her for some reason. But wait, there is more! You also need to be a special class to weild said now fixed items! Well waifu has you covered there too!

/tableflip

 

[Kaldrak]

So...this is a fairly generic isekai, BUT it is kind of like comfort food. The MC is heroic and not horrible, there are no slaves, no edgy edge mcdarkness edge stuff. The art is decent but not great and the action sequences are a little clunky. The main problem is,

Spoiler

the MC resolves every challenge he comes across way too easily.

It has the harem tag, but I've read through more than half of the chapters available and I don't really see a harem developing.

Spoiler

(They just picked up a kid who is a priestess, so not sure about that there, but the MC seems to really like the dragon girl he meets in the beginning of the story and the only other possible love interest is the adventurer's guild lady. Not saying there won't be one, but I don't see it so far.)

My recommendation on this is conditional. If you want something simple, generically isekai that you can just turn your brain off and enjoy with little/no drama or intensity, or you're tired of super edgy trash isekais in crapsack worlds, then give it a read. If you want anything that actually stands out in any way, shape, or form, then you should probably take a pass on it.

 

[Gunex]

MC = Bland
MC'S power growth = too high
Conflicts in story = easily resolved in a few pages
Brain = turn it off.
6/10. not really interesting, went 28 chp in

 

[superobama64]

We should really just start chopping off the first 5 points in the out of ten system with how people are dragging it through the mud and giving a 6/10 in the same post

 

[tsumwashere]

When reading this, I imagine Yoda saying "Too strong in the plot, that one is. Only worse at this point, it can get."

As an Isekai, this gets a 6/10... maybe 7/10 at moments. As a manga/story, this would get around 3/10 at most.
Visually good and with a good pacing in the panels and details, it's main downfall is how much it hang itself around the plot in a way that can rival the worse Manwha (which are really the worse).

The MC is relatively passive and, sometime, active and curious and yet he ends up at God level without actually putting any effort and then he's humble up to the point of being negative about it. Whenever he needs something, it magically appears within the next moment. This is basically like putting a 5 page development on a story that has 100 pages in its intro and 50 pages in its conclusion. It's something that many Isekai suffers from, but only the worse suffers from it at a point like with this one.

The Author, Toono Konoe, clearly doesn't have what it takes to write a proper story at the moment.

=EDIT=
21 chapters in and I can confirm that this is pretty much a brain-dead Isekai without any innovation nor purpose.
The Golem-pulled Cart/RV is one of the most lazy and badly though thing I have seen about Isekai's transportation. Seriously, the author even FORGOT about his own idea around the Golem because, when fighting the giant ugly tree, he made the MC us some magic instead of just making the Golem use its laser beam which, from what was shown, basically 10x stronger. At that point, the Golem which is pulling the cart is only an after-though used to literally copy-paste the SAME image of the cart multiple times over different background. (It's even worse considering how the golem is making the cart move forward in a standing pose!)

The author often put some kind of "Ho! We're gonna cover that part at a later moment" kind of situation just to, 1-3 pages later, resolve the situation. Like how the MC get a letter for the priest girl he saved telling him "If they ever meet again, she will show her appreciation"... and then they meet basically less than 5 pages later as she was waiting for him outside of town. Why the f*ck did she ever wrote that letter and not just waited for him at the damn INN?

This is getting on par with In Another World with my cellphone in terms of bad story telling and braindless plot devices.

For real. I wonder why this thing is still on going when so many manga out there that's literally a masterpiece getting axed

 

[hidgepidge]

You ever play those mobile games that just play themselves with no input needed? This manga is the manga version of that.

 

[hidgepidge]

Finally caught up so I can drop this. If the manga isn't so bad I drop it in two chapters, I feel compelled to read the translated chapters even if it's shit.

 

[Latsu]

How slop like this can get above a 4/10 is beyond me.

 

[RiffRaffROTFL]

It's fine for the genre but the balance of characters wasn't really thought out well. The author needs to either retool personalities or go all-in on Leticia.

 

[bakadrone]

Ok this is incredibly generic slop and yet I'm still reading it

 

[rosvaldo]

When reading this, I imagine Yoda saying "Too strong in the plot, that one is. Only worse at this point, it can get."

As an Isekai, this gets a 6/10... maybe 7/10 at moments. As a manga/story, this would get around 3/10 at most.
Visually good and with a good pacing in the panels and details, it's main downfall is how much it hang itself around the plot in a way that can rival the worse Manwha (which are really the worse).

The MC is relatively passive and, sometime, active and curious and yet he ends up at God level without actually putting any effort and then he's humble up to the point of being negative about it. Whenever he needs something, it magically appears within the next moment. This is basically like putting a 5 page development on a story that has 100 pages in its intro and 50 pages in its conclusion. It's something that many Isekai suffers from, but only the worse suffers from it at a point like with this one.

The Author, Toono Konoe, clearly doesn't have what it takes to write a proper story at the moment.

=EDIT=
21 chapters in and I can confirm that this is pretty much a brain-dead Isekai without any innovation nor purpose.
The Golem-pulled Cart/RV is one of the most lazy and badly though thing I have seen about Isekai's transportation. Seriously, the author even FORGOT about his own idea around the Golem because, when fighting the giant ugly tree, he made the MC us some magic instead of just making the Golem use its laser beam which, from what was shown, basically 10x stronger. At that point, the Golem which is pulling the cart is only an after-though used to literally copy-paste the SAME image of the cart multiple times over different background. (It's even worse considering how the golem is making the cart move forward in a standing pose!)

The author often put some kind of "Ho! We're gonna cover that part at a later moment" kind of situation just to, 1-3 pages later, resolve the situation. Like how the MC get a letter for the priest girl he saved telling him "If they ever meet again, she will show her appreciation"... and then they meet basically less than 5 pages later as she was waiting for him outside of town. Why the f*ck did she ever wrote that letter and not just waited for him at the damn INN?

This is getting on par with In Another World with my cellphone in terms of bad story telling and braindless plot devices.

thank you man.

 

[Vick_00]

Everyone knows the place for this 🚮

 

[CC_Gaming]

This ain't a harem, it's Bakarina 2.0. I mean even without that its still not a harem seeing as there are only hints between the MC and Iris.

 

[Darkshade13]

Potentially interesting idea that throws any semblance of uniqueness away almost instantly to engage in the same lazy OP shonen isekai mega-hero succeeds without trying trash that every other series like this does.

He doesn't like fighting and doesn't want to fight, but suddenly he's a super-skilled OP fighter that can take down mega-powerful enemies without breaking a sweat. He has crafter abilities but everything pretty much ends up on autopilot without him having to do anything and his stuff is super OP without him even knowing what he's doing.

He gets rich without trying, gets a place to live without trying, gets ladies throwing themselves at him without trying (but not aggressively enough to actually commit to a relationship because that would mean the harem tag can't be used for endless teasing of romance without resolution because that would risk upsetting the waifu stans for any girl that doesn't take the lead).

It pretends it wants to be different but then ends up in exactly the same place as everything else.

EDIT: I'm just about 30 chapters in at this point and I might've hit the thing that breaks me: fighting an enemy with regenerative powers that can also teleport and manipulate space, he proclaims "it's not fair."

This from the guy whose whole power set is built around giving him nothing but the most unfair advantages with no effort. And it's not done in a self-aware way where he recognizes that. It's like we're supposed to sympathize with him being upset that he can't easily beat this enemy with his massively unfair cheat powers because he's a hero of justice who only wants to protect everyone with his righteous abilities and innate goodness.

It's painful how not only unoriginal this is, but how any tiny slivers of originality were just tossed aside and forgotten the minute the author decided to throw in another standard trope so that is the "right" way to do these stories without caring about whether or not it fits.

 

[SchultzD]

I don't think I've read something so exasperatingly bland in a loooong while, so I'd like to highlight the problems I personally felt with this one (read to ch. 40):

• Too repetitive (the same phrases in each arc are told by different characters, the same pattern of every town the MC goes to being under attack or coming under attack in hours after his arrival, the same pattern of the battles with the Big Bads).
• Too fast (2 planetary threats are here in one-two weeks of in-Universe time aaand they were dealt with in an hour/minutes after the build-up of how dangerous they're).
• Too lazy designs of vehicles and vessels.
• Too much neglect for the MC's OP skills and things made or owned by him (I don't even understand how it is even possible given the in-Universe time frame).
• The enemies are too blunt (monsters) and stupid (humans).
• Some other issues people before me mentioned.

I give 1 point for the slimes-mascots and 2 points for the average art. Total: 3 points.