When reading this, I imagine Yoda saying "Too strong in the plot, that one is. Only worse at this point, it can get."
As an Isekai, this gets a 6/10... maybe 7/10 at moments. As a manga/story, this would get around 3/10 at most.
Visually good and with a good pacing in the panels and details, it's main downfall is how much it hang itself around the plot in a way that can rival the worse Manwha (which are really the worse).
The MC is relatively passive and, sometime, active and curious and yet he ends up at God level without actually putting any effort and then he's humble up to the point of being negative about it. Whenever he needs something, it magically appears within the next moment. This is basically like putting a 5 page development on a story that has 100 pages in its intro and 50 pages in its conclusion. It's something that many Isekai suffers from, but only the worse suffers from it at a point like with this one.
The Author, Toono Konoe, clearly doesn't have what it takes to write a proper story at the moment.
=EDIT=
21 chapters in and I can confirm that this is pretty much a brain-dead Isekai without any innovation nor purpose.
The Golem-pulled Cart/RV is one of the most lazy and badly though thing I have seen about Isekai's transportation. Seriously, the author even FORGOT about his own idea around the Golem because, when fighting the giant ugly tree, he made the MC us some magic instead of just making the Golem use its laser beam which, from what was shown, basically 10x stronger. At that point, the Golem which is pulling the cart is only an after-though used to literally copy-paste the SAME image of the cart multiple times over different background. (It's even worse considering how the golem is making the cart move forward in a standing pose!)
The author often put some kind of "Ho! We're gonna cover that part at a later moment" kind of situation just to, 1-3 pages later, resolve the situation. Like how the MC get a letter for the priest girl he saved telling him "If they ever meet again, she will show her appreciation"... and then they meet basically less than 5 pages later as she was waiting for him outside of town. Why the f*ck did she ever wrote that letter and not just waited for him at the damn INN?
This is getting on par with In Another World with my cellphone in terms of bad story telling and braindless plot devices.
As an Isekai, this gets a 6/10... maybe 7/10 at moments. As a manga/story, this would get around 3/10 at most.
Visually good and with a good pacing in the panels and details, it's main downfall is how much it hang itself around the plot in a way that can rival the worse Manwha (which are really the worse).
The MC is relatively passive and, sometime, active and curious and yet he ends up at God level without actually putting any effort and then he's humble up to the point of being negative about it. Whenever he needs something, it magically appears within the next moment. This is basically like putting a 5 page development on a story that has 100 pages in its intro and 50 pages in its conclusion. It's something that many Isekai suffers from, but only the worse suffers from it at a point like with this one.
The Author, Toono Konoe, clearly doesn't have what it takes to write a proper story at the moment.
=EDIT=
21 chapters in and I can confirm that this is pretty much a brain-dead Isekai without any innovation nor purpose.
The Golem-pulled Cart/RV is one of the most lazy and badly though thing I have seen about Isekai's transportation. Seriously, the author even FORGOT about his own idea around the Golem because, when fighting the giant ugly tree, he made the MC us some magic instead of just making the Golem use its laser beam which, from what was shown, basically 10x stronger. At that point, the Golem which is pulling the cart is only an after-though used to literally copy-paste the SAME image of the cart multiple times over different background. (It's even worse considering how the golem is making the cart move forward in a standing pose!)
The author often put some kind of "Ho! We're gonna cover that part at a later moment" kind of situation just to, 1-3 pages later, resolve the situation. Like how the MC get a letter for the priest girl he saved telling him "If they ever meet again, she will show her appreciation"... and then they meet basically less than 5 pages later as she was waiting for him outside of town. Why the f*ck did she ever wrote that letter and not just waited for him at the damn INN?
This is getting on par with In Another World with my cellphone in terms of bad story telling and braindless plot devices.
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