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I think there are two halves to the zombie girl, where mcs real aim is thr zombie spirit thing that can just escape to another body.
i made that up 
That's a fair assessment.honestly this started out kind of new and fun but it's kind of a mess now. And I'm not saying this because MC wants to save the weird zombie girl, I'm more annoyed with the abstract power scale right now.
seriously if they have this insane powerful girl right here who's cutting through the demon king's daughter like she's cheesecake, why did they even need to summon people from other world to save them?
Also how strong is MC exactly? I was more into the whole secretive assassin mostly because it's fun seeing him trying to outsmart these insanely godlike characters to kill them while he's the weaker one.
And yet here he is, fighting on par with some insane demon sword who can literally slice people to pieces within seconds???
WimpHe's having an existential crisis. He probably doesn't know either
honestly this started out kind of new and fun but it's kind of a mess now. And I'm not saying this because MC wants to save the weird zombie girl, I'm more annoyed with the abstract power scale right now.
seriously if they have this insane powerful girl right here who's cutting through the demon king's daughter like she's cheesecake, why did they even need to summon people from other world to save them?
Also how strong is MC exactly? I was more into the whole secretive assassin mostly because it's fun seeing him trying to outsmart these insanely godlike characters to kill them while he's the weaker one.
And yet here he is, fighting on par with some insane demon sword who can literally slice people to pieces within seconds???
I think what makes it an enormous problem here is that the initial premise was extremely structured on multiple levels.yeah, this series really doesn't seem to know what it wants to be. it started off with a weak, sociopathic, sadistic, loner MC who loves (and is addicted to) killing, but who now is fighting on the frontline, collecting friends, monologuing about being nice, and protecting the weak
that's not in itself a problem, but you can't just forcibly shift the entire premise of your series and expect it to work, at least not in such a short number of chapters