Isekai Kaeri no Saikyou Tamer, Tsukaima wa Osananajimi - Ch. 12

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the story would have been better if mc throw pebbles or something then when the thugs came, the pebbles shot down either to floor or some bodies creating effect as if a shooter going batshit then mc duo ran while fake screaming...

these thugs really feels as intelligent as nothing, asking please don't go we got a back up who will grape your girl so please go with us because we can't do anything to you
 
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Fun premise, but can we ditch the high school bullies for a higher class of enemy? I expected this adversary to last all of 5 chapters before they joined a clan and started clashing with other clans. It would be far more interesting if the bad guys actually reflected and became better people, but I guess that would give their characters more depth than the main duo.
this would've probably worked better had it been a monthly thing then it could've been over in like 3-5 chapters even with the dumbass highschool bully part which i get is for the plot and is building up to something but it really doesn't work well in a weekly setting
 
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This is so hilariously bad, even GPT wouldn't write this poorly. I'm pretty sure the bully got twice the page count of the main cast at this point.
 
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So this is a pretty simple storyline. Only question is how often will this be updated?
 
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So this is a pretty simple storyline. Only question is how often will this be updated?
Raw probably released weekly since it's released in line mangga (not sure how that differs from webtoon)
I really wanto read the raw but too bad the web is geolocked and my vpn doesn't seems to work on it
 
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I hope the MCs dont stay the way they currently are. Right now they are painfully boring and don’t have much of a personality other than enthusiastic girl and stoic boy. Probably too much of an ask since this is this definitely just gonna be another power fantasy slop. Another nice cool thing would be for something to happen that doesn’t make every fight just them squashing every monster and person but that is again too much of an ask for slop.
 
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Man, I feel so painfully brain-rotted since I don't particularly find this manwha bad. Like I've read so much worse.

This just has a simple story and it's kind of refreshing to see characters that aren't pushovers for the sake of the "gotta hide my powers" trope.
Everything is going kind of slow, but the pace is pretty well kept.
 
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They both keep talking about the other world directly in front of other people, including a reporter... they really suck at hiding their secrets. :dogkek:
 
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To be honest, the writing is somehow like amateur writer. And yeah, still okeyish and better then isekai cheat.
 
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To be clear, I know I'm giving this author more credit than they deserve to think it's anything other than "other more popular series did this too", but... Damn
Tbf, that is all that is needed. Or more accurately, all that is needed is "this setting should lead to an interesting story". This is all that suspension of disbelief is all about.
Why do the animals on the farm speak english? Because it allows the author to tell an interesting story.
Why does every hot girl in the school like mc? Same answer.

Yes, they can come up with explanations after-the-fact that they write into their setting, to explain it with some internally consistent logic. But that is always just an afterthought, and arguably, someone narrating the "why"'s and "how"'s to the mc who's already living in the same world, at the point the camera turned on, is actually really unlikely (though for this story it is more likely seeing as they are claiming to be amnesiacs with no memory of when those dungeons appeared, AND studying in a school with some kind of dungeon curriculum).
 
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Highschool bullies were easily taken care of instead of pointless drama? Damn, my rating of this just went up.
 
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Still fails to explain at the very least the lack of high quality bulletproof vests, which would be more protective and less cumbersome than the armor they're wearing. Those goblins and orcs didn't seem to be using any magic, either

To be clear, I know I'm giving this author more credit than they deserve to think it's anything other than "other more popular series did this too", but... Damn
They aren’t fighting monsters that use guns or spears, they’re fighting ogres and so on that use blunt force.

But I do agree, you’d think the dungeoneering would be done more interestingly.
 
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bro i had hope for this but those bullies are really boring, and they were going to rape her but mc didn't give them a good beating? like why?
 
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bullet proof vest uses Kevlar, its woven in such a way that it catches and dissipates force applied by a bullet. A plate carrier hold thick steel plates or steel ceramic composite plates that stop bullets dead in their tracks. A Kevlar vest is easier to move in and less cumbersome to a degree, but offers no protection against blunt force trauma. It only stops piercing force at high speeds. You can still stab through a Kevlar vest with the right tool. A plate carrier is better but it’s heavy and awkward for making deft movements in. If you’re in melee combat, use armour that’s been honed for melee combat eg. the stuff used when we were still hitting each other with metal manually.
I remember today we have something similar to flak jacket that can stop stabbing and slashing like chainmail... With today's technology we thought this comic will use that
 

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