Isekai Meikyuu de Harem o - Vol. 9 Ch. 65 - Day Off (4)

[MangaDex]

 

[Izaya_Onisai]

The drop in translation quality is killing me... after all these chapters suddenly Rewind and saki are suddenly gone... and now we have this liberal translated slightly rewritten version that damages the sentences... even the innuedo of most sentences are gone and Roxannes ultra loyal sounding sentences are also damaged with the translators and pr's personal writing style... really sad.
Also the placement of the sentences and size of them is a total mess not at the side but over the image... please do it like it was in the raws without damaging the art.

 

[Xeroxcopy4free]

"please use me to warm yourself up" damn, anyone would be perk up if they heard that. Roxanne best girl

 

[dementati]

The art is hot and all and I don't really mind the translation, but holy crap, MC's internal monologue while they're having sex is so freaking cringy, it's kinda hard to read. I guess this is a thing with a lot of erotic literature in general, but using nature-inspired similes instead of saying tits and boobs and whatnot sounds so fucking stupid. "I am an explorer, let's go exploring!" please kill me now.

 

[crunchyspider]

The art is hot and all and I don't really mind the translation, but holy crap, MC's internal monologue while they're having sex is so freaking cringy, it's kinda hard to read. I guess this is a thing with a lot of erotic literature in general, but using nature-inspired similes instead of saying tits and boobs and whatnot sounds so fucking stupid. "I am an explorer, let's go exploring!" please kill me now.

You may need to pull back and look at this from another angle. This was originally a light novel and writers have vested interest in making sex scenes be interesting to read. The LN sold quite well, so it seems a lot of people liked the text-y sexy scenes. When you develop a LN into a manga, you are paying an artist to illustrate your LN as a manga and there's a lot of budgeting where your art dollars go... so sometimes you get some word salad on your sexy art pages.

 

[dementati]

You may need to pull back and look at this from another angle. This was originally a light novel and writers have vested interest in making sex scenes be interesting to read. The LN sold quite well, so it seems a lot of people liked the text-y sexy scenes. When you develop a LN into a manga, you are paying an artist to illustrate your LN as a manga and there's a lot of budgeting where your art dollars go... so sometimes you get some word salad on your sexy art pages.

Yeah, I mean, like I said, a lot of erotica does this, not just LNs, so clearly some people like it. But I don't. I HATE it. Just to be clear, it's not that it's wordy, it's the word choice that I have a problem with.

 

[TheronHunter]

Thank you for the quality upload as always, I enjoy me some uncensored nips.