@vvinchan For future reference, when the publisher censors tiddy, don't put your own stuff in the black box without mentioning it. It looks bad on you.
As for the scanlation. The translation is a bit dodgy and the typesetting can use
a lot of work. The rule of thumb is to only break words on syllables and to always try to keep the text is a diamond shape similar to the bubbles.
Some padding will also help a ton, I know web draws don't generally have a lot of resolution to work with but a little more space never hurt anyone.
@Amerak @monkey123 Publisher side, checked the raws.