Isekai ni Kita Boku wa Kiyoubinbode Subayasa Tayorina Tabi wo Suru - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

[MangaDex]

 

[Lorexen]

With this chapter, I can sorta feel the mangaka is adjusting to how to write pacing? Again i made some adjustments to my work flow and continued to make things more stream lined. Anyone that has suggestions or feedback that will help the quality is super welcomed.

after getting ahead in the JP version, i noticed the art does significantly improve over time, im hoping the pacing gets a little more on par with the WN, either way i still love this general story
its calming.

 

[Akera93]

Why did I even add this to my reading list ? The 2 updated chapters are stupid AF. I wonder if this went downhill after the first chapter of if this was shit from the beginning and I clicked on reading instead of dropped by mistake

 

[vessalius]

oh shit is this the manga that people got super pissed about cause he got his name translated as black rabbit?

 

[Aquacube11]

How is black rabbit a bad nick name *grumble grumble*

 

[jimmyclear]

This is so broken, but we get the gist of the story.

 

[Liver]

The bubbles are all mixed up.

 

[A31D31N]

I loathe goodboy harem MC self-inserts and chuuni edgelords about the same degree.

Still gonna read it through because of my curse.

 

[Aichan]

The dialogues in this manga is just... and the story is so...

Ai-chan thinks the mangaka (or maybe the author) didn't go out much.

 

[Her0]

the dialogue is very confusing

 

[vessalius]

@Aquacube11 something about it being a racist way to refer to people of african descent.

 

[dextersTomato]

MC's face and his ability to make something for a laugh was mismatch.
The comedic scene back there with the 3 goons, i think its kind of corny.
Because of MC's personality and the design of his face, maybe the laugh intended on that scene shout incite us, but it didnt get thru me.
I believe MC's personality and his look are mismatch....

For Daniella, she has this Norl vibe from Gacha series because of the face mask, cute, thicc thigh and beautiful

 

[7senpai]

@Aichan the novel is good but the manga is don't know what to say

 

[RagingDragon]

I feel like I'm losing brain cells while reading this.

 

[DaMeat]

Thanks for the chapters.

 

[Fa-271]

Thanks for the chapters.

 

[Elhao]

Dude, unless you are L that's not how you use a chair.

 

[Gladiator02]

Thanks for the chapters
It seems some dialogues are shown to be said by the wrong people. It's not hard to figure out to see who says it though.

Btw i laughed when the adventurer suddenly started telling his childhood story lol. Although it's not a rare thing happens in manga i like how Mc says “Nobody asked that!” .I might start reading the web novel. Seems fun

 

[Lorexen]

@Gladiator02 I'd you look both in Japanese and English he says I don't care I just want to help her! Lmfao. They totally jabbed at story's all of sudden giving you history in the middle of a fight.
Also I noticed that afterwards and my bad, I'm getting used to speech bubble positioning sometimes it confuses me but I'm working harder on each new chapter.

 

[Gravewind]

It's forbidden to call asagi. Black Rabbit

Hahaha. So good.

So, I read the tiger translations web novel of this for quite a while. I can honestly say that it doesn't really get any better or any worse than this. It's a nice read, but don't expect too much more from it.

Spoiler

My main gripe with this story was how long it took this idiot to get rid of his convenience store uniform and blend in.