Isekai Nonbiri Nouka

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"It's that dangerous thing you see in detective dramas"

My first thought was nightshade, or some similar poison. My second thought was weed. Please let it be the latter.
 
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Hmmm, I kinda get bored reading it right now. It feels like reading a Log rather than an actual story, everything felt bland. I guess because the story have no basic story structure like intro, progress, rising action/tension, conflict, climax, aftermath, falling action, and denouement. It's completely flat, everything went into mc favour.
 
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This is obviously a series where the author is just self-inserting. I have thing for terrible series; it's interesting enough.
 
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this becomes more boring by the chapter, it became like a sitcom with daily happenings taking over the majority of panels.
 
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This manga is being super barebones. They are passing by all the story moments and there isn't even filler. We don't even get to know the characters anymore. A bio and it's off to dialogue on a trade deal or village management.

There has been a baby and a pregnant angel and I don't think either had more than a panel.
 
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1. We do this.
2. I got this.
3. This happened.
4. The result is this.

This is just a picture diary, or a report, or a list of event. Because there's actually no story telling at all.
 
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So glad they needed a separate chapter for those extra 4 pages, I don't know If I could have handled them all at once.
 
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Meh, I'll drop this. I just don't want to read a drawing summary of novel.
 
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Feels like a journal, or perhaps a production/transaction log.
____May 5th_____
Produced: 500 grapes, 10 gallons of wine, 30 puppies, 500 spiders, 1 angel, and 10 acres of farm land.
Attempting production of 2 vampires, 30 elfs, 10 beastmen, 4 angels, and one oni.
Sold: 10 gallons of wine.
Purchased: 100 Elfs, 17 beastwomen, 5 lolis of a new, unheard of race.
____May 6th____
Same as yesterday times 1.15
____May 7th____
Same as yesterday times 1.15
____May 8th____
Same as yesterday, but I really hurt my thing, God I wish I wasn't running a harem factory with thousands of beautiful girls and women but no other males in sight. How unlucky am I?!
 
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He wasted the whole segment on conjecture about the hierarchy of power in the family
 

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