Itsumo Baka ni shitekuru Bishoujo-tachi to Zetsuen shitara, Jitsu wa Ore no Koto ga Daisuki Datta you da. - Vol. 2 Ch. 10

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God.. The writing is just horrendous 🥲..

Why is literally everything happening so frantic and inconsistent 😐..

At this point the MC feels Schizo, like what happened to the whole stuff in the beginning, when just 8 chapters later mc just forgets everything and just says everything that happened was his fault anyway makes the whole premise feel kinda pointless 🤨

Also the "Hollow" might aswell be applied to the personalities of all girls in this manga
 
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Honestly, it's great that she decided to not date him after that. He wasn't saying yes because he likes her back or saw a future with her, he was saying yes because he felt pity. Good on her for recognizing it.

The slap was going a bit too far in my opinion.

From his perspective, he already knew this was the wrong choice, he even said in his internal monologue that he had a bad feeling about the response he was about to give. But he's not mature enough to realize he had to say no there.
Her rejecting him after the positive response is a necessary step for him to grow up.

But I'll repeat myself here, the slap was going too far. For a guy like him, that already suffered in the hands of the three girl for treating him like trash when they thought it was harmless banter, this whiplash could just revert him back to the state he was at before the first one apologized.

Again, he ended up being hurt because he couldn't say no and step up for himself. And now he not only would have been hurt emotionally, but also physically.

This story does a lot to address some concepts, but I feel it falls flat on others related.
Still an interesting read, though.
 

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