@Tanzanite Hey, quick thing. I'd recommend leveling your pages so the blacks are black and the whites are white. How much you have to level always depends on the raws you have (some raws are better than others in this regard), but this one is particularly brown where it should be black. Example:
I wrote "HI" there in full 0,0,0 black, and it's very noticeably darker than the surrounding bubble (which is supposed to be black).
That aside, thanks for the chapter, and for doing this series in general. I've been enjoying it quite a bit.