Joshikousei to Seishokusha-san - Vol. 1 Ch. 5

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The ilustration about normal situation are good, but at the ero situation is very good (especially female body)
 
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Tsutsugou truly is the best character with the best fanservice.
 
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Oof, hahaha, I remember when my drawing is that bad.


It's still far away from great right now, but it at least resembles a person!
 
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I wish his assessment was translated.

I can read katakana and the last line before the conclusion says "serifu no sansu" which I think means Sans Serif? even though it's a hand drawn manga so that makes no sense, and he gave it an X which I think means she didn't use Sans Serif.
 
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I wish his assessment was translated.

I can read katakana and the last line before the conclusion says "serifu no sansu" which I think means Sans Serif? even though it's a hand drawn manga so that makes no sense, and he gave it an X which I think means she didn't use Sans Serif.
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rough translation from the top

Quirkiness?
politeness?
art??
Sense
climax (like the big art spread)
framing

Theme uniqueness
World view of singles
introduction, development, turn and conclusion
Consideration of the reader
Dialogue sense
 

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