Just Date Each Other Already! - Oneshot

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I like the idea of the classmates trying to desperately hook these two up so they won't be annoyed by their oblivious lovey-dovey shenanigans, but I think it needs a bit of a stronger focus on the classmates and their suffering, rather than those two MCs; as it just comes across as a standard rom-com currently.

Still a fun read though.
 
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And so through their reverent prayer, the classmate's curse was lifted...

AND GIVEN TO YOU, READERS. NOW YOU SURELY HOPE THEY DATE EACHOTHER.
 
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Oh you can do this to me! You got me invested into seeing their romance, and it ends because of the school bell? NOOOOOOO! Yamashita likes Hiekawa because he was so cool for helping her during the first day. Hiekawa likes Yameshita because she was so cute, he couldn't do anything but help her!

And they've slowly helped each other without realizing they loved each other! We need more content regarding the in between their almost realization and the first day!
 
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I like the idea of the classmates trying to desperately hook these two up so they won't be annoyed by their oblivious lovey-dovey shenanigans, but I think it needs a bit of a stronger focus on the classmates and their suffering, rather than those two MCs; as it just comes across as a standard rom-com currently.

Still a fun read though.
Agree. If there were a serialization, it needs to intro the classmates more and show their side. The idea is sound, the execution needs more.
 

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