Kajiya de Hajimeru Isekai Slow Life - Vol. 4 Ch. 20

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thats the second broken ass who knows exactly smiths would ask for more money and they still be like "hehe yea that's all i have"
The audacity brah
At least ask before the job is done
 
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Gotta love when someone doesn't want you to ask questions but asks you whether you're going to ask more questions thus extending the time spent on the entire subject of their secrecy. Pretty crap writing/character right there. Especially from a character that should know better with the years lived. Not to mention his initial question is 100% valid as she is in his territory and doing something weird to/with the tree.
 
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Basically in the future chapters, which are the prologue and epilogues for each LN, he really is largely a mysterious figure and the ones ones the historian manages to find and interview (Lidy, Rike and a few others) also don't tell much about him. He probably asked them not to say too much ig
is this like very future where eizo already died?
 
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is this like very future where eizo already died?
Well... it's implied he's dead. At the very least he's not had any public appearances for decades. Also, it appears at least Rike and Lidy are living in their own villages separately when the historian meets them. When the historian asks them if Eizo is still alive, both of them just smile and don't answer.
 
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Well... it's implied he's dead. At the very least he's not had any public appearances for decades. Also, it appears at least Rike and Lidy are living in their own villages separately when the historian meets them. When the historian asks them if Eizo is still alive, both of them just smile and don't answer.
i see, make sense considering elf and dwarf are long life lifeform this probably happens past human age
 
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Enjoy the chap we've TLed, guys!
Your TS could use a refresher on how and where to line-break and hyphenate words and where not to. Knowing this is literally part of that position's job.
  • The hyphen from a line break NEVER goes at the start of the new line. Ever. (When it does, it's not from a line break.) No matter how many SL TS insist on doing so, especially for honorifics. There is zero typographic justification for doing that.
  • "Strange" has only one syllable and CANNOT be broken at all, no matter how that makes it not fit the bubble. Spill, reword, whatever. You don't want to produce garbage like trashadokai's.
  • Don't break for cosmetics over reading flow. For only a trivially minimal increase in jaggedness of text outline, that LY could have well fitted whence it was taken:
    PERSONAL-
    LY VISIT THE
    Breaking in favor of tracing the bubble is pointless, self-serving vanity. Bubbles serve the text, not the other way round, not least when they were originally shaped for a writing system you're not even using. And in compound bubbles, it's not a sin to nudge lines to make use of the extra space if it saves on crowbarred breaks.
  • Also applies to Japanese names and terms. 栗型 (previous chapter) is kuri-gata, not kuriga-ta. Might not technically be wrong, but text picture does affect how it sounds in the reader's mind, especially when the reader has non-zero familiarity with the source language. Prefer the former.
 
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