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Grande cooked so much that they cooked out "wait, how did Yuuki end up at Miyu's location now?"
Sword Art Online sells, so copy their style.Hurr yet another manga doing the "save her from a rapist" thing. Why does it feel like every romcom goes this route?
As much as we hope for more developed story, here's the reality...Another day, and another plea from me to the Japanese.. this trope is old and tired.. even the subversion of this is tired.. it needs to be put out to pasture and shot in the back of the head. I've read countless thousands of manga, webcomics, twitter shorts, etc.. this is so overused, do something new.. I'm begging you.
But drama assumes a buy-in from the reader. A chapter where she tries to leave the MC because she is self-reflecting on her actions would have been more in line with this series and provided ACTUAL drama. A chapter or arc where she has to ACTUALLY struggle with her choices would be drama.Cuz raping brings the most drama.