Kamige tte Souiu Koto desu ka - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - The girl and the God's gloomy relationship

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Punctuation Fairy, dropping by!

p6
>Don't just build a temple in the middle of the office president!
office, president!

>It's fine though isn't it?
though, isn't it

p8
I got a mail from a pretty important company
company.

p10
>Alright I'm heading to the meeting!
Alright, I'm

>You're being boring again Anna.
again, Anna

p12
>I did my job just like you asked Anna-kun.
asked, Anna-kun

p13
>Get hyped me!
Get hyped, me!

p17
>You're very good at drawing
>You look diligent
add full stops (or commas, depending on what you're going for, in which case start the third bubble with an "and")

p23
>Cheer up Anna-chan!!
Cheer up, Anna-chan!!

p24
>Sensei where are you...
Sensei, where

p27
>since before you even joined Sensei!
joined, Sensei

p35
>These girls were also gods suffering from loneliness
loneliness.
 
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"oh this looks like New Game"

>
Main heroine almost got raped by a sadistic furry god

Ok that was NOT what I was expecting.

Lowkey pressing the follow button, this manga have a lot of "potential"
 
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@GoggledAnon Woah that's a lot! Guess I'm pretty bad with punctuation~
Thanks for writing it all down nicely like that, I fixed up everything now.
 
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What the hell are they doing writing crappy mobile games when RTS genre is in such need of god touch?
I literally only read first chapter just to post this comment
 
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Wait a sec the early exposition blurbs says there's six people working at the company...I count only five or four if the CEO doesn't count so who are the other 1 to 2 employees?
 
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I want to emphasize something implicit in @GoggledAnon's comment.

Vocatives should always be offset by commas when they participate in sentences with other parts of speech.

[ul]“Steve, bring me a hammer.”
“I need that hammer, Steve.”
“Where, Steve, do you think that you're going?”[/ul] It only makes sense to write something such as

[ul]“I need that hammer Steve.”[/ul] if there's some entity called “hammer Steve”.
 
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I can relate so well to the very bottom panel on the second to last page. Ordering online and self-checkout has made my life much easier.
 

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So this is New Game, but good? Knowing this author the lust god is gonna remove her collar every chapter until she wins.
 
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Bland, boring, and uninspired.
Seems this mangaka burned themselves out on Mimi Mix.
I mean, I would still read the second chapter if the first at least had the semblance of a story, but this is just insipid nonsense.
 
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oh yus, new work after mimi mix, i'm all in for this :D

the art remains really good in this as with mimi mix, glad to see that and I'm liking the new cast. Wonder how the yuri is going to play out and with whom~
 
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So I guess this parodies Norse (Frenya seems to be a parody of Freyja), Japanese (Sagiri and Mei), and Jewish (Raphael) mythologies, but it makes them really gay. I like it.
 

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