Y'know what time it is.
p1
>It's still morning, what is it Raphy-san?
It's still morning. What is it, Raphy-san?
p4
>Stop it Raphy!
Stop it, Raphy!
p5
>Wait a minute Raphy.
minute, Raphy
>Ooooh that's pretty nice!
Ooooh, that's
>Alright then Mei!
Alright then, Mei!
>Actually it turns out
Actually, it turns out
p6
>draw me a new picture every seconds!
second (unless there's a number you accidentally left out)
p9
>We're relying on you Anna.
We're relying on you, Anna.
p11
>It sure still looks like a normal mob huh...
mob, huh... (Optional: maybe replace "mob" with "background character" for those who don't really know the term)
>make a very attractive character Mei-san
character, Mei-san
p12
>In the background of the story we could have the hero actually beep all night every nights
In the background of the story, we could have it so that the hero actually beep all night, every night
p15
>Sorry president.
Sorry, president.