Kaminaki Sekai no Kamisama Katsudou - Vol. 2 Ch. 9 - The story about another world that is not another world

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Thank you for the better translation. Still needs a proofreader, but so much better and much more tolerable.
 
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Im the proofreader its still bad?
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The things you were seeing a moment ago there are fake images created by this of this room.

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The objects of this room... ItThey seems to be called a "machines".

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I don't even know, how many hundreds of years have pastpassed.
The prohibition of sexuality was also due tofor the sake of controlling the population size.

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It's difficult to find a time in, the history of mankind when no one believed in gods.

That is all. It's not too bad to the point where it's unreadable, it's just a few nitpicks by me.
 

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