Kanojo no Sore ni Yarareteru - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

[jackjack9]

Dude got quite an imagination

 

[AvalancheTriode]

Nishijou Takumi level delusions there, MC-kun.

 

[Unconformity]

Bro is in denial stage. It won't be long tho

 

[chronostriker1]

@SquigglesJP including what @Extreme-Tactician mentioned Pg. 4 bubble 2, The "I've" shouldn't be used the way it is. The correct grammar would be, "I have a favor to ask you" or "I've got a favor to ask you". These notes are assuming American English, I can't speak for British or other English derivatives, but I doubt it would be different in this case.

Also I think on Pg. 10 bubble 2, you meant to say "I've been done in again..." And on Pg. 11, the way Chests is used there is odd sounding, I suggest going with, "boobs", "breasts", or any other slang. Pg. 14 bubble 1 should say "How much did I drink..." Pg. 15 bubble 3, you don't need to identify the specific bottle so it should say "was that?" Bubble 6 the phrase used is clunky, would just say "It's the same stuff."

I've noticed this in quite a few of you translations small issues like this. I don't know if you have a person doing proofreading or doing qc, but you may want to find a native english speaker to fill one of those rolls. I don't mean this as a slight, its just that you do a lot of translations which we are very grateful for, but I think filling one of those rolls would make them that much better.

 

[yazh]

I think this the first time I’ve read that they didn’t make a big deal with the indirect kiss or maybe one of the few times I remember if I’ve read more

 

[antibear]

@ ARealCoolGuy I was wondering that, but I think that maybe she doesn’t actually know that he touched her. She might have woken up, and just felt that her boobs hurt for some reason.