Kareinaru Akujo ni Naritai wa!: Aisare Tensei Shoujo wa, Tanoshii Nidome no Jinsei o Okurimasu - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Admiring the Cool Villainess Figure.

[MangaDex]

 

[BreadBunny]

oh! the old translation has disappeared. Good to see someone else has picked the series up. Hope to see more.

 

[lesseffective]

oh! the old translation has disappeared. Good to see someone else has picked the series up. Hope to see more.

Simply another casualty in the Asmodeus Purge.

Edit: But lordy, this is some atrocious grammar...

 

[a_singular_strike]

Thanks for the chapter.

-_-
Dear barkeep, I'd like my "Villainous" story with a base of "Eminence in the Shadows" mixed with "Banishment to a poor no-mans-land frontier region". Add a "Regarded as useless with my magic, but I was actually OP" note and please do not forget the "Reincarnated" straw, you know how much I like them with the past regrets. Of course stirred, not shaken.

Jokes aside, this story does feel like a mish-mash of tropes, loosely held together by duct tapes and prayers.

 

[Serverclosed]

Very meh, but will keep reading.

 

[OtherACTION]

I just wish people who translate manga to actually learn grammar before they upload. I mean, its not only the grammar, its also about the different Font that is used which makes no sense to change the font 3 different times; for example in page 12, what is the meaning of changing the font?

Just stick to 1 or 2 Fonts based on what should be used, for example Comic Sans for speech bubbles and a different font like Arial or Times New Roman for other stuff like narration and information boxes such as names, occupations, and locations.

 

[lesseffective]

I just wish people who translate manga to actually learn grammar before they upload. I mean, its not only the grammar, its also about the different Font that is used which makes no sense to change the font 3 different times; for example in page 12, what is the meaning of changing the font?

Just stick to 1 or 2 Fonts based on what should be used, for example Comic Sans for speech bubbles and a different font like Arial or Times New Roman for other stuff like narration and information boxes such as names, occupations, and locations.

I can't explain the font choices, but being able to explain the grammar is as simple as looking at the group page.

 

[Taikhi]

Joy and sadness mixed into one.
Thank you for your hard work.

 

[WaffleSekai]

I just wish people who translate manga to actually learn grammar before they upload. I mean, its not only the grammar, its also about the different Font that is used which makes no sense to change the font 3 different times; for example in page 12, what is the meaning of changing the font?

Just stick to 1 or 2 Fonts based on what should be used, for example Comic Sans for speech bubbles and a different font like Arial or Times New Roman for other stuff like narration and information boxes such as names, occupations, and locations.

For the font type, I do adjust it to the type of bubble, regarding the thickness of the font, it's like emphasizing certain words, sorry🙏 if it makes you uncomfortable because I'm used to that method.

 

[WaffleSekai]

Simply another casualty in the Asmodeus Purge.

Edit: But lordy, this is some atrocious grammar...

Thank you 🙏 for the criticism & suggestions, this is the first time translating into another language, so it still feels unfamiliar😅

 

[Flostirend]

Thank you 🙏 for the criticism & suggestions, this is the first time translating into another language, so it still feels unfamiliar😅

Try to say the translation aloud, or imagine it talking to friend. If it sounds bad, remake the translation, or so they say it's how they do it, still can't phrase two words without mistakes or sounding aarkward. Languages aren't my thing.

 

[welcome2atlantis]

This wouldn't be weird as a one-shot. That last panel, after that pan up and show "The Villainess' Journey Has Just Begun" and "The End...?"
Anyway, what I'm saying is it's good. Looking forward to more chapters.

 

[DCdiacole]

Yo just to tell you, we can see the "tidak apa apa"

 

[rkkn]

the heck? why'd the mom die?

 

[OtherACTION]

For the font type, I do adjust it to the type of bubble, regarding the thickness of the font, it's like emphasizing certain words, sorry🙏 if it makes you uncomfortable because I'm used to that method.

I understand for emphasizing certain words but when the whole bubble is affected then it really throws you off. Like, depending on the font, it could be emphasized as the characters are whispering or yelling but when you use a lower case font when the character would be in a foul mood, like on page 12 in second speech bubble, it feels like she is whispering when she should be upset and on the verge of yelling as seen in the next panel.

To emphasize this emotion before changing the font, I would use the font from the first speech bubble and use bold rather than using a completely different font so you would keep the consistency but emphasizing the emotions. And for specific words, could just use bold or italics or both for expression.

 

[Hollow7F]

You know what....i just noticed Villainess are just Gyaru for fantasy settings, fr
its the same concept with replaced societies
noble society adn japanese society when u are just supposed to act a certain way and conform to the world, but gyarus and villainesses stand up for themselves and do what they want

 

[DaoFox]

getting a bad case of deja vu... I'm not even going to bother reading it this time I can only assume it'll be another month or 2 and another complete beginner will fill in after a new purge...
my only requirement for current beginners: read a few series translated by longtime groups, if you can't figure out whats wrong with yours when comparing them side by side at a glance you shouldnt be posting it to the public.

 

[Andasen]

All hail Princess Mi-, wait wrong series