*Goes red*
Wow. This is... very hot.
I just think the pace is a bit too fast for my tastes, and this story would have been better if it had been spread out on double the amount of chapters it got.
@Mchelsing, the summary of this story clearly uses 'he' for the protagonist. There's also a Yaoi tag, though maybe the tag hadn't been added yet when you checked the story out. Nevertheless, please read summaries in the future. That way you won't have to complain you didn't know a story was BL or some other trope/genre you dislike.