Keikenchi Chochiku de Nonbiri Shoushin Ryokou ~Yuusha to Koibito ni Tsuihou sareta Senshi no Mujikaku zama~ - Ch. 33

[DemonHide]

If you save the daughter, the reward is the mother. Them's the rules! I'm sure there's plenty of room up there for a second seat, and he can turn that queen-size bed into a king-size overnight.

 

[betetta]

Read about the twist already but it doesn't make the story less dumb. The twist that had never been hinted or built up is just a cheap plot twist for the sake of 'gotcha'. That's just a plain lazy writing.

I'm only following this story to see his ex-party got humiliated at this point since the main story is so repetitive and boring.

You just described Darth Vader being Luke's father, plot twists can go well if they're executed properly even if they were clearly thought after the story started.

Also, you really sure your two paragraphs match?

Spoiler: Because...

the big twist is precisely about the former party and why everything happened

 

[ohms]

You just described Darth Vader being Luke's father, plot twists can go well if they're executed properly even if they were clearly thought after the story started.

Also, you really sure your two paragraphs match?

Spoiler: Because...

the big twist is precisely about the former party and why everything happened

Spoiler: If you are referring to

his ex-girlfriend was actually a demon then, that's what I'm talking about

And that's why I called it lame.

Yes, there's an exception like you said but I highly doubt this story can pull Darth Vader consider how the world building has been practically non-existent here. The Vader twist works because it matched the established lore and that makes it feels believable but we have nothing that can lead to that twist here even after 33 chapters. It's just another plot twist for the sake of plot twist.

Yes, the two paragraphs match. I am only here to see his childhood friend get wrecked but I don't really care about the process; just want to see it happen and done with it.

 

[elia_zz]

Trash, Mc is still a virgin despite being cucked at the start, all his bitches got stolen from him and when he finally has bitches again he doesn’t make them him his, author do you know the concept of learning from mistakes? Why can’t you make MC see that if he wants to protect them then they can’t be PURE ANYMORE they have to be his and his alone but you make the mc the generic brown hair cuck who and stutters like a school girl but has plot armour so women flock to him, it’s always the same bit it’s even worse cuz you made sex scenes with them being fucked but never one including Mc expert for a tiny blowjob, author get your priorities straight you fucking clown

 

[jmgaling0924]

Im getting impatient i hate when stories like these drags the plot like go to the other girls and deactivate the spell and beat up the brave more like the coward already

 

[Davrwa]

Queen is hot. She should give MC another type of reward after this, if you catch my drift.

 

[komandan]

thanks for the chapter Messrs. Kappa

 

[HiiroMimori]

Aura farming time? Let's go.

 

[ARXGB1]

To be fair, you never disclosed the staff on the group pages since none of them are credits, so how are supposed to know it’s just you and another guy, gasha? And since it’s a 2-man cell, it’s probably you and a TL, right?

doesnt really matter ppl gotta chill out and stop being freaks most of the time ppl do these TL on the side and dont get anything for it

 

[lovolo]

The queen is hot not gonna lie

 

[xKIZUKIx]

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