Hey guys! It's great that you tried to pick this up, but honestly I think you left too much unfinished parts, both translation- and edit-wise. Personally I don't like when there's so much vertical text, after 3-4 occurrences it's hard to read. All in all the quality is subpar, especially for such a great manga. I think if you worked on this chapter for a couple of days longer, it would have turned out much much better. And obviously it's not that healthy to work on this at 2 a.m., both for your health and the resulting quality.
Keep up the work and try to do better next time, thanks. Oh, and somewhere in the future, take some time, come back to this chapter and redo it.