Kindan Shitei de Breakthrough - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

[StaK]

Wait does he lose Sadith??? Shes the most important part, does anyone know any spoilers on what happens with her?

 

[StaK]

@Twi can you explain what you mean a bit more for me? Im fine with any and all spoilers
How does he "Lose" Sadith like he says her in the chapter? They clearly love each other right? I feel like if anything, she should be way too important to him for him to be able to give up that easily - didn't he say he wanted to marry her? Though I guess he shouldve said that to her...

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Why does he give her a panic attack? Why does that mean she won't be able to support him? She really cant get over her issues enough to make things work? I was shipping them to be together at the end of the story

 

[Twi]

@Stak I went more into it in other spoilers you can find here in this chapter comments. To sum it up

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Sadith is a traumatized war orphan who witnessed the murder of everyone she loves in the hands of the demon king and he uses the exact same magic. Obviously she still cares for him but if he continues to use that technique there’s no way she can be near him and he accepts that. For the first time in his life he’s comfortable in his own skin.

 

[Izaya_Onisai]

@NotFunstuff You missed a page.
The missing page:

 

[NotFunstuff]

@Izaya_Onisai Re-uploaded, no idea how that happened. It was there locally, so it must've gotten lost on the upload to md or something...

 

[sineclayr]

The way I'm not even surprised that his parents are like that. Are these people for real? Like just because his daddy a whole swordsman genius doesn't mean that he is. Like, no one bothered to evaluate his abilities and teach him techniques that utilize said abilities. No, they just assumed he's going to be just like his old man. Man fuck them

 

[StaK]

@twi wow that really sucks

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I get that she's traumatized and all, but at some point you've got to be able to move past your traumas - if her parents got killed with a sword would she hate all magic swordsmen? - I know you said he accepts it

but I still I really hope that she overcomes that and ends up with him someday - do you think theres any chance of that happening?
Have you finished the novel (Is it finished in its native language)

I want to figure out the spoilers for how the romance plots go (Sadith and Fiancee) before I decide to get emotionally invested in these characters

 

[Twi]

@Stak
It’s been awhile since I read this but

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I’d say there’s no chance, mainly because she doesn’t think he really likes her that way despite everything up to now. Like many of the students and people in general believe he and the princess are in love. Sadith also thinks that way. If you’ve read the latest manga chapter you know a group of students misunderstood him as a declaration of love for the princess. Sadith thinks that way too. She even does things to assist the princess. I’m not sure Sadith ever gets it. She never took him seriously.

He meets other people some fall for him, but this series is more about finding his own path in life. I’m not up to date but maybe later on there’s some romance. There’s one point the princess meets another girl that likes him.

So your his first love?
Princess: yes we both love each other.
He told me about you. I won’t lose to you Sadith!
Princess: eh, that’s not my name
Huh?
.................
Both: Cough anyway I won’t lose to you!!!

 

[StaK]

@Twi lol goddamnit if only he'd had the balls to say what he wanted to instead of "can I squeeze your tits" I cannot facepalm hard enough knowing that he fucked that up

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and doesnt make it right for the forseeable future

Since it's still unfinished Im gonna keep my fingers crossed and hope for a happy ending with Sadith & Fiancee + whoever else, since sure why not, Im fine with a harem 🤞🤞🤞

 

[rufioh]

@NotFunstuff I know the word "thou" is rarely used in modern english (it turns out it is still used in some dialects in the UK) so a lot of people don't know how to conjugate when using it. And it just so happens your usage of words surrounding "thou" on page 3 and 4 is wrong
"You can" would be "thou canst", so "you cannot" would be "thou canst not"
"you did" would be "thou didst"

Also there's an instance where you write "what art thou's future goals", whilst "art" is correct to use with "thou", you should've used "thy"

"thy" is equivalent to "your" whilst "thine" is equivalent to "yours", but if the word that follows "thy" begins with a vowel you would use "thine". Techninaclly you would do the same thing with "my" and "mine" when it comes to being followed by a word beginning with a vowel sound, but that's an archiac way to use the words, but when you write "thy" and "thine" you're trying to be archiac, so it's fine

An example of the vowel thing I mentioned above would be if you want to say something like "your eyes", the modern 1st person singular form would be "my eyes", the archiac 1st person would be "mine eyes" and the archaic 2nd person would be "thine eyes" (and I guess if you were to apply the modern rules it would be "thy eyes")

EDIT: on page 16 it should be "thou hast". "Hath" would be the archiac form of the 3rd person singular e.g. "he/she/it has" used to be written as "he/she/it hath".
on page 18 you said "thou will", it should be "thou wilt"

 

[Allen_______]

@StaK en la novela web earth le cuenta sobre el rey demonio y la convence, pero earth quiere volverse mas fuerte y planea irse de viaje pero sadith quiere ir con el pero el le dice que no y al parecer aun quiere estar con el pero earth llega la conclusion de no saber si realmente esta enamorado de sadith ta que no conoce a tantas mujeres y quiere conocer a mas mujeres y se da a entender que sadith siempre lo va a estar esperando cuando regrese de su viaje

 

[Koyomiya]

“Who knew my devil king that haunts me could be so cute?”

 

[Ragu_Jostar]

Yessir
I was bout to drop this cause it was a school Fantasy

 

[black_knight69]

having a bad mc is not so bad after all i can enjoy his improvement

 

[Thoshy]

>character growth spurned on by the desire to touch breasts
Denji approves

 

[IronicWeeabo]

LETS FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

 

[SoulOverCaos]

when in fact his mother is a hero too and they did drop the information, the whole story makes you think "obviously he has to be like his father" because that's what everyone thinks, but everyone is also a bunch of superficial idiots so...
i'd say a well crafted plot twist, simple but nice none the less

 

[TNT261]

Wait so this entire time literally everyone has been forgetting he’s the son of another legendary hero and - I don’t know - maybe inherited her talents instead of his father? Okay, so literally everyone is just the absolute worst, a bunch of idiots, and worthless superficial stains. The only good character is the sadist maid. Everyone else should be just spontaneously combust. Also he has laughably bad parents; did their own parents never spend time with them growing up.... or praise the.... or even just pretend to love them? Like have they not seen actual loving families before and think “huh, I should probably give my son at least a hug now and then”.

 

[Osaka_Vibes]

Lol what a demon king

 

[jokerxhisoka]

lol author doesn't seem to know what subtle means