Story is a bit lacking but huge potential. MC not so likeable, he takes care of the kids especially during trials, but not because they have a bond but because he has to. Not so likeable as in, he doesn't have something to make me cheer him on. His passion is money and is self-preserving, that's mostly it. Unlike Grid in overgeared, he has a "trash" personality but he has good points, and his character growth was a journey that made me support him more and more.
And this MC is blind to the real happenings of the story which isn't much of a critique but is a bit annoying that he's out of the loop, like why don't they just tell him.
The kids are cute, that's been keeping me going.