Kiraware Majo Reijou to Dansou Ouji no Kon'yaku - Vol. 3 Ch. 12 - The True Feelings

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I guess if you're going to avoid the comments on your chapters there's no purpose to point out all the things that were wrong from doing it in that little amount of time...
Hey, it’s not that I want to avoid the comments,it’s just really hard for me, for psychological reasons, to even open them.
It’s a fine line for me when it comes to being willing to read comments.
If you find anything where you think I translated something poorly, feel free to point it out; I’ll probably fix it. It‘s not your fault but now I fell kinda bad for not reading comments
 
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Hey, it’s not that I want to avoid the comments,it’s just really hard for me, for psychological reasons, to even open them.
It’s a fine line for me when it comes to being willing to read comments.
If you find anything where you think I translated something poorly, feel free to point it out; I’ll probably fix it. It‘s not your fault but now I fell kinda bad for not reading comments
The biggest things I'd point out:

-Page 1: Because English sentence structure is different than Japanese, the text in panel 2's box needs to be moved to the end, and the other two boxes shifted over
[Because I had never been loved like that before]
[I was afraid my heart would be thrown into confusion.]
[So I pretended like it meant nothing.]

-Page 9: Yuyu, as established in chapter 9, refers to Evris as (her) sister, but here you've turned that into Yuyu referring to Evris as Ciel's sister.

-Page 13: "But if it's His Highness's older brother," should be "But if you're..."
 
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If you find anything where you think I translated something poorly, feel free to point it out;
On page 8, Evris says "She" when referring to Prince Ciel. Later in the chapter, we're reminded that Yuyu didn't know she was female, so either that should have been "He" or that should have caught Yuyu off guard like it did when her brother told her.

Thanks for the TL!
 
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Thank you for taking over another abandoned series.

As for any mistakes, important thing is that this is a lot of work for someone to do by themselves, especially for free. So I appreciate that you're willing to step up to do so.

My suggestion is to look for a few people who can help you, if not for anything other than to prevent burnout.
 

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