Kitaku Tochuu de Yome to Musume ga Dekita n dakedo, Dragon datta. - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

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Note to self: never get near any women, you might get roped into taking care of her kids even though you didn't even sleep with her.

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I love this story because we skip hundreds of chapters of relationship building and then babies to both relationship building and babies
 
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I mean, I dig the dragon x human romance and stuff...but a strange girl appears one day and boom you're forced to be a father the same day, no sex and no knowledge about the other...Man manga became lazy
 
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That feeling you get when you know your kids are going to outlive you for centuries.......
 
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Nothing impressive so far. At least the babies are cute.
 
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This is another one of those Mangas where I think the Author tries to Force the Protagonist into a situation when they don't need to do that. And that's bad because it ultimately just robs the MC of Agency. Granted this story has that going on far less than other similar stories, which honestly just highlights how unnecessary it all was.

Just let the Protagonist actually Choose this. It wouldn't even be hard with this Protagonist since he's already a guy who will tear his hands open to help a stranger. I think you could completely remove the Rat Character and just have chapter 2-3 be the two MCs interacting, with Dude deciding after watching her take care of the kids and learn more about who she is to help her. This could also give you a chance to explain the Dude's magic earlier, and perhaps work that into the story.

Basically, remove all of the ridiculous requirements and conditions and focus the story on the relationship between the protagonists.

This also gives you the opportunity for a great joke because with chapter 2-3 being the MCs just interacting with no one else getting involved, possibly up on the Fang Rock, before deciding in this chapter that she should see about living with him in a better location, you could have chapter 3 end with him bringing her home to his family, who are worried because he's been gone for an entire day or more, and he's just like "Oh yeah by the way this is Mai Waifu we have 2 Kids can she live with us here?"
 
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the FMC must have a putang amiright fellas? where did those egg come from if she dont got a putangg? I hope at some point they go physical and fuck the shit out of each other otherwise this be some bullshit. fucking parenthood without even having taste the joy of fucking my god
 
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Generally egg-laying creatures have a cloaca rather than the set of funholes we're used to, but it's not like that's going to stop any man worth his salt from sticking it up in there.
 
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Wow, that's legitimately more interesting...that's my new head canon for this story. Just going to pretend all that happened before then next chapter.

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of course! Hell, I would say your not really a man if you don't want to stick it in her ass and with this you get to do it every time. It is truly to perfect funhole!
 
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this is purely "stupid", the only thing why I read this because it's cute tho...
 
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@kronix @goblinguy

And just to make that more interesting, the cloaca is in the butthole. So like, chickens lay eggs from their assholes. And have no vagenes.

So if she's a normal egg-layer, she has no pussy, just an asshole that can wrap itself around something long, hard and about a foot in diameter.
 

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