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- Feb 23, 2023
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The writing of this story feels... inconsistent.
Mentioning trans people offhand as the reason these two can't share the secret because to paraphrase: "the transes might start near-killing themselves to try and transition" is... a writing choice. Both for how the rules of this world are being set up by the author, and what the authorities within it are doing in response.
I think It'd be a little less jarring if there was any indication that the eggheads were researching this so as to activate, prevent or reverse this process without life-and-death stakes.
Mentioning trans people offhand as the reason these two can't share the secret because to paraphrase: "the transes might start near-killing themselves to try and transition" is... a writing choice. Both for how the rules of this world are being set up by the author, and what the authorities within it are doing in response.
I think It'd be a little less jarring if there was any indication that the eggheads were researching this so as to activate, prevent or reverse this process without life-and-death stakes.
