"Koko wa Makasete Saki ni Ike!" wo Shitai Shinitagari no Nozomanu Uchuu Gekokujou - Vol. 4 Ch. 20

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What the hell is going on with this plot?
Is this based on a novel?
It's like the pacing and plot is all over the place.
More like, translator difficulties. Mangasushi mentioned previously that they've had staffing, and quality assurance issues as a result. I think they might have assigned this title to one of their B-tier staff groups, so it's a little wonky.

That said...

"Her Highness is requesting the Captain's presence."

immediately cuts to Mr. Fellman

Hime-sama, doko?
 
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"female cooks" um. . . ok. Maybe a translation bit.

Black tux, white shirt, black bowtie. . . The military men are in formal uniform, but there's another "guest" with the same attire. Are you a waiter? Is the thought balloon covering up a drinks tray?
 
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More like, translator difficulties. Mangasushi mentioned previously that they've had staffing, and quality assurance issues as a result. I think they might have assigned this title to one of their B-tier staff groups, so it's a little wonky.

That said...

"Her Highness is requesting the Captain's presence."

immediately cuts to Mr. Fellman

Hime-sama, doko?
Page 3 seems like it has some of its text swapped around too...
 
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When the fuck were elves a thing?
Space elves are standard, but maybe it's just ear surgery?

But yeah this chapter was even more messy than usual.
He leaves with the princess and when he arrives at destination he gets informed by someone coming from behind the host of this nihonium place that her highness wants to see him?
Did she teleport there ahead of him? First I thought it was a different highness but nope, it's not even a highness at all.

Then we have the standard scene where the very Japanese MC in a non Japanese world sticks out like a sore thumb and acts cowardly, just why.
Into another trope of stolen girlfriend, clearly you can't have a regular breakup, it's straight up stealing for some reason.
 
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What the hell is going on with this plot?
Is this based on a novel?
It's like the pacing and plot is all over the place.
Yeah this ch is a clusterfuck. Suddenly a party and now you have to work with 4 important NPCs that you’ve never met before and then BAM bossfight: the guy who cucked you.

Butler wasn’t kidding when he said this is a political FFA.
 
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Yeah this ch is a clusterfuck. Suddenly a party and now you have to work with 4 important NPCs that you’ve never met before and then BAM bossfight: the guy who cucked you.

Butler wasn’t kidding when he said this is a political FFA.
It'll be fine
Turns out the NTRman's just a nepobaby with no actual achievements of his own
everything he has was passed down to him

Meanwhile our MC here gets achievement after achievement one after another like it was going out of style
He gets promoted so fast he doesn't even realize he's already an Admiral and still thinks he's only a Captain
 

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