here comes the shoujo shit. no, women: men do not take interest in you  or respect you when you bitch and cry at them. male fantasies basically reflect the structure of reality. these Mary Sue monologues where you get to make yourself the center of attention while everyone stands back stunned and impressed are the most vapid fantasies ever, there's no trace of virtuous femininity in it, just pure vanity.
What the hell are you going on about?
"Male fantasies" and "female fantasies" are by definition both fantasies. Fundamentally neither reflect reality. That why they're called fantasies.
Also, the uninterrupted monologue happens a lot in fiction, because otherwise it would take twice as long for them to get through the scene with people interjecting their opinion every which way.
But all of that is irrelevant, because I'd like to point you to the part of the story where it takes place in a fictional world depicting fictional events, and thus as long as it maintains a sound internal logic, the author doesn't necessarily need the story to conform to "the structure of reality".
