Man if only this wasn’t so rushed.
I mean the headcanon and tiny detail people here are having a field day, but as a normal reader the tension is just barely there. I don’t give a hoot about it being 3 or 4 walls.
But hey, here are some more panels to raise up edgy spy girl. And don’t forget characters talking in a meta way to the reader instead of to other characters.
I don’t have a huge problem with the things happening, I have a problem with how things are happening.
It’s like the author knows where he wants to get to the end, but didn’t have a detailed plan. Now the team is rushing through the prototype of an ending the novel author didn’t want to flesh out himself.
A pity, but I guess they didn’t want to take a step back and let the writing team work on it more. For whatever which reasons.