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Nah, more like in the grimdark future!god emperor? like the monarchies of old?
Nah, more like in the grimdark future!god emperor? like the monarchies of old?
Yes but they’re still significantly better than the locals, and can still easily handle issues that arise.Alan was never OP when it came to anyone from his tech level, though.
Selena and Sharon constantly one-upped him long before the hiatus point, to show that even vat-grown and flash-trained clones are better than Alan. Alan straight up says that he's never won a single sparring match against either sister. And even his advantage in being able to better visualize concepts to direct magic is undercut by the twins just using hypno-training to get the same effect.
Yeah, because he has an artifact, which were already said to be near-peer or better than Imperial technology.Yes but they’re still significantly better than the locals, and can still easily handle issues that arise.
And then suddenly we have General McSkullface show up as MT and fucking tanking stuff like he’s WoL.
Did you actually rerad the chapter properly? It says clearly that the person in question is his son, not him...Alois just 'escaped' like that eh somewhat disappointing
Legit, what do you expect him to do to unite the continent, by using his space tech? In order to peacefully resolve the scenario, he has to choose from:So he come from a advance star trek like society and his solution is kill them all....
Truly stupid, and not the fun kind.
Just for the sake of completeness, let's list some other options.Legit, what do you expect him to do to unite the continent, by using his space tech? In order to peacefully resolve the scenario, he has to choose from:
A) Convince the southern faction to surrender (this is a political thing, not a science thing, his tech gives no benefit here)
B) Convince the south that the doc isn't a forgery (he could use carbon dating or something, but there's no reason to believe the southern faction would believe this, when it's a tech they were introduced to specifically to prove them wrong)
C) Forego convincing, and take them over by force using his space tech power
He's choosing C, which is the only one of those that would actually work in his favor. I don't know how you expect star trek tech to help him out in a way that isn't exerting military force on them.
Maybe it's just me, but Cleria feels like a weak leader. She doesn't feel ready for what's currently going, let alone what's to come. I sense no co-rulership ahead. Maybe it's best she remains in the dark about what's really going on as Sharon suggested. She'd just be overwhelmed.
I doubt this is going to happen here, but in a different story she'd just become a forgotten/puppet queen as Alan creates his little imperium for the greater good.![]()
Sure, but how are you going to get the people you infect to eat the special alloys needed to construct the nanoms? Alan needed to get Cleria to eat a few pills to allow the hive inside her to grow.mc, just use nanoms, to synthesize some sickness, use the drones to distribute it and then, go "saint mode" deactivating the nanoms (curing) said sickness
plot magic, not the first time author pull some bs to advance the story.Sure, but how are you going to get the people you infect to eat the special alloys needed to construct the nanoms? Alan needed to get Cleria to eat a few pills to allow the hive inside her to grow.
If you’re going to infect a water source, that’s going to take a lot of nanoms (Alan’s blood) and starship alloy.
You’re making assumptions about facts that are not in evidence.plot magic, not the first time author pull some bs to advance the story.
so let's say:
- via air dispersion, insert the first ones and get them to replicate from there.
- special alloy, can be made already, the city has the machinery to do it, and (cleria and mc needed to take the pills because it was an emergency situation no time to wait for the nanoms to grow slowly)
- alan blood wasn't needed, it was the only way to share the nanom at that moment, again, the city already has machinery for things, and time, they have at least a few months, which wasn't the case with cleria the first time, which needed a new arm and leg.
you say it is worse, but that's just your opinion, the only thing that I suggested that could be called an assumption is the air dispersion, everything else is already in the story, machinery, how the nanoms works, etc.You’re making assumptions about facts that are not in evidence.
You’re just creating plot holes and making a worse story just to push forward something you think is better, rather than working within the setting.
If you’re going to complain about what the author is doing, don’t suggest something that is blatantly worse.
Even if you are able to process the rare metals needed for the nanoms, how will you get the population to ingest it? Alan stated that without taking in the metals then the nanoms can’t be maintained.you say it is worse, but that's just your opinion, the only thing that I suggested that could be called an assumption is the air dispersion, everything else is already in the story, machinery, how the nanoms works, etc.
as easy as dropping it in the village's well. And the nanoms aren't required to be maintained for long, just enough to cause some kind of deficiency, so mc can come and play saint.Even if you are able to process the rare metals needed for the nanoms, how will you get the population to ingest it? Alan stated that without taking in the metals then the nanoms can’t be maintained.
Chapter 1, Page 19.
Why is this even necessary when the Apostle Isaac (the drone) can be made to appear at Alan’s command to show his connection to the Goddess Luminous?as easy as dropping it in the village's well. And the nanoms aren't required to be maintained for long, just enough to cause some kind of deficiency, so mc can come and play saint.
any other trouble your mind can't solve?