Kouritsu-Chuu Madoushi, Daini no Jinsei de Madou wo Kiwameru - Vol. 9 Ch. 49 - Demise, Then...

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kinda thought this was getting axed as i read it XD

last chapter i thought maybe the other worlders invade and blow each other up for the lols or something but i will settle for time travel nonsense since thats what this is based on.
 
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Anyone know if this dude is final boss? Or is this some DBZ garbage where Zeff is also going to go into slowed time to train for 3k years and come back with power level over 9000 and beat him super easy?
Villan already did it so why the hell not :D And god, I hope it won't end up like DBZ for another reason. Let's assume there won't be any skips and we'll get 1ch per month- I won't stand waiting 3 years to let them finish powering up before fight. Ya, DBZ had those. And then equally long fight with dialogues on dialogues on dialogues.
 
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So...why not just say that you had a future sight and tell that the guy they imprisoned for a thousand years is gonna be a monster in a months time? They should kill him now while he's defenseless!
 
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The moment milly died i expected it to come down to time travel. But boy i didnt think it was going to be so plot armory and dumb
 
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Seriously... just kill the bad guy while he's helpless.

The story just went to shit in these last few episodes, feels so damn forced and like the author ran out of ideas and just wants to end it.
 
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TIme Travel.....obviously....
at least kill the bastard...and not waste his time by "training even harder" i mean that bastard basically got 10 decade of training ahead of him coupled with him being much stronger than the MC in the first place (not sure if its a thousand years....i don't remember)
 
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1. Killing the dude while in prison... I'm not convinced this is as easy as it sounds. Yes, he is defenseless at the moment. But access to him must be very limited, and telling the magic association that he came back from the future has several hurdles. First, does the mc want to share the info about his time travel magic? Because, second, they kindly won't be convinced without a demo which, third, he is not able to do on his own at the moment.

2. I don't think this would have been too much of a deus ex machina if written a little differently. Instead of making it sound like a miracle born of wild magic explosion and extreme emotion, it would have been better as a display of last minute wit from the mc. We already know he can time travel. Just write it as him using it consciously, using the rampant magic as fuel to supplement his missing potential. The way this turned out is lazy and shows the mc couldn't think of it by himself (stupidity or panic, it doesn't matter). The "it just happened" way is indeed bad writing, even more so when minor alterations would have made it at least ok if not actually good.
 
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well...saying i "saw that coming" would be an understatement
(oh come on, this was so predictable)
 
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Expected it back in last chapter, but honestly... It's boring? Cliche? is probably a better word. Either way whether he time travels or they die for real would suck (to me anyway).
 

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