@FudoMasamune
Most problems were minor, the ones I reacted most on were early, so I figured I wanted to at least toss them in your direction to use or ignore:
Page 2:
Panel 1: "were peaceful so far" -> "was peaceful to begin with"
Panel 2: "monster nor there are any trouble" -> "monsters, nor are there any other problems"
Panel 3: "While changing the mood" -> "As a change of pace"
Panel 4: "proceed as planned" -> "then continued as planned"
Page 3:
Panel 4: "shows a reaction of 10 orcs" -> "indicates 10 orcs"
Page 4:
Panel 4: "The orc reaction" -> "The orc numbers"
Panel 5: Untranslated speech bubble