Kuma Kuma Kuma Bear - Vol. 5 Ch. 41

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It might be interesting if they actually did run into something strong enough to actually make the idea of having to run away with only her own bodyguard work in mind. It'd have to be one hell of a critter to qualify and all. At least a mid-boss?
 
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No s after "want" when using the first person singular or plural (unless you're Gollum). Check the tense you're using, it's weird sometimes. Reminder that a party includes more than one person, so please consider it as plural when discussing its "members". Same deal when discussing a group of orcs. Reminder that " -'re" is short for "are" so don't use it so freely after "you". Page 15 first panel on the right, you could've cut the "there are" when she mentions the possibility of a stronger monster appearing and it would've been just fine.

Like other people complained about, you should review your grammar. But the rest of the work seems good. We can still roughly understand.
 
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I like Marina's character design, her cat hair looks cute.

Itia isn't a name I remember, she looks cool. It is correct when reading the character reference though. Dunno why Xants team translated it to Euri.
 
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If a monster stronger than bear makes an appearance, they are doomed. And so is the country. Srsly.
 
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The translation really is quite poor. Not only is the grammar just wrong most of the time, there are also a couple situations where the meaning has almost been lost entirely because the translated sentence is almost unintelligible.

This might be your first time, but I would argue you shouldn't translate into English without either more experience with the language or a proofreader that has as much fluency as a native English speaker. It's harsh, but you don't have the skills to be able to do this yet. Keep studying, try again when you have a better mastery.
 
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@Glomoro Whenever Yuna brings kids, they always prioritizing running away. She never brought them to any dangerous situations, be it field monsters, rare field monsters, mid-bosses, dungeon bosses, or even a raid bosses. She always faces them solo, or on a very rare occasion a super elite party
 
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Yep, seems about right
 
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Last page... gotta draw the assholes - even through they're summoned beasts with probably no need to shit, it's important to have an asshole for aesthetics...
 

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