Kuni ni Saikyou no Barrier wo Hattara Heiwa ni Narisugite Tsuihousaremashita ~Ore no Mahou ga Yabasugite, Bijo to Mazoku ni Kakomarerun da ga!?~

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People have stronger opinions on the flavor of vanilla ice cream then the plot of this story. This story has got to be the baby first steps for an author at this point. It's just so cookie cutter.

I don't hate it, but their is nothing here to peak someone's interest aside from the again basic bitch ultimate dragon girl. Def a 6 or 7 on the first chapter alone. Who knows, maybe it gets better.
 
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Well do I really have to right a review to explain how shit this manga is.

Man I should really just make a standard review that I just copy and paste for these kind of mangas.

Unoriginal, generic, absolute trash of a plot and story, a pace that is going at lightning speed and as usual things happens just because, no rhyme or reason ever given.

The first thing that comes to mind is why ?
Why getting kicked out? Sure that’s easy to explain later but then what the fuck did you think is gonna happen when he get banished ? Why the fuck assassinate him ? Can you even kill him if he is that god like ?

Oh and don’t forget to add the o shit that dragon turned into a hot GF and elf slave later on and all that jazz maybe some cat girls here and then create a harem of his own countries.

Who even fucken cares anymore, I can deal with this low effort shit.
 
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Well do I really have to right a review to explain how shit this manga is.

Man I should really just make a standard review that I just copy and paste for these kind of mangas.

Unoriginal, generic, absolute trash of a plot and story, a pace that is going at lightning speed and as usual things happens just because, no rhyme or reason ever given.

The first thing that comes to mind is why ?
Why getting kicked out? Sure that’s easy to explain later but then what the fuck did you think is gonna happen when he get banished ? Why the fuck assassinate him ? Can you even kill him if he is that god like ?

Oh and don’t forget to add the o shit that dragon turned into a hot GF and elf slave later on and all that jazz maybe some cat girls here and then create a harem of his own countries.

Who even fucken cares anymore, I can deal with this low effort shit.
The manga is mid but your whining is worse.
 
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Not sure why people are getting so worked up in the comments. Its not great, not even good, but its still better than most fantasy manga.
 
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This shit isn't just phoned in, it got faxed. This is the most "could have been an email" manga yet. I think if you have this little passion for an artistic career you should probably just do something else.
 
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JAPANESE MANGA CHALLENGE (DIFFICULTY IMPOSSIBLE):
-MAKE THE TITLE OF THE MANGA LESS THAN 200 CHARACTERS
-DON'T MAKE IT A HAREM
-MAKE IT SO THAT ANYONE WITH 2 BRAIN CELLS CAN'T PREDICT THE NEXT 70 CHAPTERS PERFECTLY AFTER READING THE FIRST CHAPTER

GOOD LUCK JAPANESE MANGAKAS
 
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"A country fires a mage after becoming over-reliant on magic they thought was permanent" could be tapped for some worth, especially for comedy, or maybe a more carefully considered kingdom builder.
Okay now I want to write a story with that storyline in it, without it just being cliches. Thanks for putting that into my head. It's not as if I have anything better to do with my time. XD
 

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