Kurasu no Gyaru ni Kuuki Atsukai Sareteimasu - Ch. 17

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I like the font you used. Makes the actual text pop out a bit more if that makes sense (and even if it doesn't it just looks good).

Thank you for the translation.
 
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The pages look fine. SFX are nice to have, but I wouldn't worry about skipping them if they ever end up taking too much time.
 
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If you want my opinion, it's that I didn't notice changes. That being said, not noticing them is better than them sticking out like a sore thumb. I think it is done well enough to not be distracting, but as for whether it's worth the effort when It goes unnoticed is up to you.
 
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I think the text is fine. I'm not sure about the SFX, it doesn't seem like it adds much. Is there a reason why her walking has SFX shown as "hurry"? She doesn't seem to be running.
 
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New font looks good.

Your SFX work is really nice and appreciated, but if it's too much work redrawing you should just insert the tl nearby
 
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you do not need to do sfx, its enough if what they say is at written on the side of the pages or something, looks good though
 
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What is this obvious ambush? Wtf? Mf lucky asf
 

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